At The Oasis Where I Found you

A competition against an old work of mine.

As splashing lights paint various hues,

It seems Nature has readied her sweetest brew, 

Hexed, I was charmed at first sight of you, 

And I wondered, if you felt the way too?

- Stu. T.H. (December 12, 2023)

Author's Note

The old work in reference:
Title: Oasis (Old)
... I remember the days when I am free, of my works and all duties, I was on a short adventure of mine, a dive into the natural world, hidden away from men's modern cultures. There, deep inside the woods and timber lines, after a canopy of foliage, I see... A pond so bright and kind as sky has ever be, thus I complimented the pond, but got no reply. But, I was content with it.
Thus, I spoke...

"Water flies brightly, reflecting the sky,
All my sorrows, all hidden and gone hide.
River gently flows, caressing my chaste,
You, oasis on earth, deserve my amaze."

- Stu T.H. (Jun 17, 2023)

May I ask you, readers, to tell me which you prefer? Simply pen your thoughts as you fit.

Reviews

[Masked writer]

Omg this is cliche and i kinda love it...Very well done...

As for penning my thoughts, I love them both, though they both emphasize different things... or atmost different perspectives on said topic...

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your visit and thoughts, author Masked writer, at least it has entertained you even just for a short while.

[Masked writer]

No worries, Hope your having a great day! :D