Sonnet: Fairy tale's Enchanted Garden

Think it looks more posh than usual? I made this on my Chromebook, of course, it'd be quite fancy, made for your gaze only.

Sonnet: Fairy tale's Enchanted Garden

Walk into my garden, 

Which is enveloped in blue roses,

And you'll find yourself lost, fair maiden, 

Walking barefeet on my mosses,

And as you peer around,

My roses will secrete their perfume,

The aroma will get you aroused, 

While you admire the dancing petals bloom,

Frantic heartbeats, I'll allow,

As you'd witness my entrance,

But do keep your voice down,

As the garden's still full of sleeping remnants,

Curious maiden, you'd make a great addition to me as a rose,

Now lay still, as I claim you, by bewitching you with my prose.

- Stu. T.H. (December 2, 2023)

Reviews

[Kane Hagwood]

I feel like I need to read this by candlelight, putting on smooth jazz, while holding a rose of my own between my teeth. Like the font, this work is bold and shows passion without holding anything back. It's brave, lustful, while at the same time being soothing. Indeed there's a kind of loving bewitchment with the words you've strung together with elegance. Well done with this magical poem :)

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for indulging in my work, author Kane Hagwood, I've been trying to pen my works more eloquently lately and finally have had the chance to do so more often, so I'm quite pleased.
Again, thank you for your visit and I wish you a good day or a nice evening depending on where you are.

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you very much, and same for you, friend :)