Senryu: A tease

A bit... provocative. I do not know what came over me at the moment.

My heart is throbbing, 

Do not play this game, honey, 

Don't keep me waiting.

- Stu. T.H. (November 11, 2023)

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A tease indeed. Perfectly conveyed. I do enjoy senryu and haiku. A few words can say so much.

Chris

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for coming by, author Chris Shaw.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

A perfect senyru here
Love it

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your kind praises, author Julie McCarthy.
And thanks for enjoying it!

[AYVID N]

Loved this compelling and racy senryu. There's an exciting urgency in your words that gets to the reader.

[Stu. T.H.]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, author DIVYA!

[Starbaby]

oh, everyone should endeavor to let their inner flirt out once in a while. Nothing the matter with being provocative. let loose!

[Stu. T.H.]

I'll be sure to do so, author Starbaby, haha. Thanks for coming by and enjoying my work!

[Matthew Kult]

Sweet suffering at its finest.

Great read.

With love

Matthew

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for stopping by, Matthew~!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Some lovers procrastinate just for the sake of teasing.

Sometimes for a little too long.

[Stu. T.H.]

Some sure do love to tease a lot, and I can understand why, being able to get an adorable reaction out of your loved ones can be very amusing and fun, but it's not so fun being teased is it ...