Birthday

Birthday

A Poem by Donna
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How I feel about my birthday!

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When I was a young girl I would count the days until my birthday.
All I wanted was to be older. My Dad and I would celebrate our birthdays together, since they were only days apart.
Now that I am older, they aren't so fun. My Dad is gone and I'm just getting older and older.
Life goes on and I am thankful to have another birthday.
Happy birthday to my Dad, and to me!

9-17-2020

© 2020 Donna


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(Life goes on and I am thankful to have another birthday.) Indeed...it is a better alternative that NOT having another birthday eh? I enjoyed this write. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


Donna

2 Years Ago

You are absolutely right! Thank you for taking the time to read.
Hi Donna,
Well, as they say "Time flys" And, it seems to go at full speed now that I am older... My daughter is 52!!
Yikes...
I always loved and still love birthdays...
When I was young I used to watch the clock, high on the wall in my classroom, waiting for it to be time to go home...
Hurry up and wait...but as I have gotten older I am more patient..
Enjoyed reading your poem..
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yes I feel the same way
I recall my birthdays as a young teen mum brought me brekky in bed and a present usually an lp or similar
Those were the days
I can relate to this Donna
Today my baby is turning 27 wow
I can still recall it like yesterday
Thanks Donna

Posted 2 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Years Ago

Yes I have oldest turning 34 and my middle is 32

Thanks 🙏
Donna

2 Years Ago

Mine are 37, 36 & 34. Plus I have 4 grandsons. Take care Julie.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Years Ago

You too
No grandkids here
Very sweet. I am older and avoiding mine. I enjoyed your write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Donna

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
I'm so happy you and your dad got to celebrate your birthday's together Donna. That was such a beautiful and important bonding thing for you both. My thoughts and prayers are with you my friend (((HUGS)))
Take care
Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


Donna

2 Years Ago

Thank you Richard for reading my poem and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it very much!
Donna, You have a Tender Soul and it shows through your sweet words. -Ralph

Posted 2 Years Ago


Donna

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ralph, that means a lot to me!
Such a nice poem about a happy feeling, it's a blessing, thanks. --- And Happy Birthday when it comes around. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Donna

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Old age is wonderful for some, fearful for some. But body never supports mind later. A horrible experience. All are becoming old.

Posted 3 Years Ago


What I've always loved about your writing is the way you are so conversational & so revealing & so honest about what you're feeling. I think self-honesty makes for the best writing, like this. I have not celebrated a birthday in about a decade. The whole concept has become meaningless to me now (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Donna

4 Years Ago

Thank you Margie! I really value your opinion!
This was a magnificent and heartwarming poem, that was a bit bittersweet. I'm a month late, but happy belated birthday to you and your father! Birthdays are so different as you get older. I can only imagine how even more different they get. A great poem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Donna

4 Years Ago

I appreciate that so much! Thanks for taking the time to read my poem!

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