Life can Knock you Down

I have been away for awhile dealing with some personal issues, it took some time, but I am now back and doing much better. This is about how life can knock you down.

     Sometimes life can knock you down

and you feel as though you will never be

able to get up, and really don't know if you

really want to.

     I have seen things that I don't ever want

to see again. I have experienced things that

I don't want to ever experience again.

     So many times I wanted to just give up,

then I think to myself, "I am strong, I can

handle this, I will keep going."

     Sometimes life will knock you down,

but I always get up!

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Well said Donna, your poem should be on billboards and across buses and at railways stations. So everyone can read this. And not feel so alone and afraid to speak out when they are that low and sad. And want to end it all. Inspirational, heartfelt, real, raw and so true. Felt this way myself so many times. And like you said. But I always get Up!

And its show we are not alone in this feeling. Bless you, Donna. Dawn.

[John Prophet]

Hi Donna,

Yup, life can be some very rugged road, but we all must keep pushing on.
Nice work.

JG

[Donna]

Hi JG, thank you! 😊

[john l smith]

You are young and strong and the ability to be able to get back up is a gift that should not be wasted
Well expressed
Dave

[Donna]

Sorry that I took so long responding, I haven't been on here to much. Thank you, I appreciate your review!

[Gee]

Yes, that's the spirit. Life is to fleeting, boots get on with it, make the most of it but most importantly love it.
A great message Donna.

[barleygirl]

This is a great way to show others how it's done . . . many artists have tender spirits that get knocked down easily or often. Your personal essay shows how to own our own little breakdowns without feeling bad about it. We each have to do what we have to do. For me, the many intense news stories regarding some aspect of "Me, Too" (sex abuse) . . . brings back bad memories & I need to go off by myself & clear my channels again. Hope you will steadily be building back your desire to spend time here! We miss you when you're gone! (((HUGS)) Fondly, Margie

[KCthelastboyscout]

Great message for others to relate to in case they need to read something to brighten their souls and lift their spirits

[Donna]

Thank you so much!

[ohiojohn]

From the song; "Patches"!

"Life kept taking him down to the ground, when he tried to get up, life would take him back down".

Patches made it, so can you! :-)