Wonderful Lady

Wonderful Lady

A Poem by Donna
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This is for one of the most beautiful, caring, sincere people I know.

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I know a wonderful lady named Rita

She is so nice and kind

with a very sharp mind


Rita gives food to the poor

sometimes she is sore


She always puts others first

even when she feels her worst


She raised her nine kids by herself

Could you imagine doing this yourself?


She has a heart of gold

and as pretty as a marigold


I know a wonderful lady named Rita

Some call her Senorita.


THE END

© 2018 Donna


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well this lady is a supermum first and foremost and then an angel in disguise well done xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

She is amazing! Thank you!
This is proof that the world sn't all crewl and hateful. It's still kind souls out here and this lady you dedicated this poem about proves it others should read this and learn from it. Beautiful dedication I really like it thanks for sharing and as always keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice write to share of someone you know... Thanks you for sharing with us

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is an epitome of a good woman, a one in a million people

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Thank you sette, she is one in a million!!
sette

6 Years Ago

you are welcome
Sounds like a woman that anyone would be truly blessed to know. Thank you for sharing this amazing woman with us.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Thank you Nesu! I appreciate your comment!
This is a brilliant & loving tribute. It not only shows us about Rita, but also shows us so much about YOU! The things that you love about Rita are the things that show us where your own heart resides. Your choice of details works perfectly. Even tho your expressions are simple & straightforward, the sincerity is so pumped up, it wouldn’t be as sincere if you tried to craft it into fancy phrases (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is the very definition of " mother" putting everyone's needs before her own.this sounds personal.your mother or some other family member perhaps?

Posted 6 Years Ago


A nice little tribute to what sounds like a very kind lady. With nine children she would certainly be a very busy lady. Sometimes it is the busiest people who give their time more freely to others. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nine kids, Damn!!! Sounds like a wonderful lady.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

She is truly amazing. She had nine kids in nine years, then her husband left her. She put them all t.. read more
Lyrically Inclined

6 Years Ago

Wow that’s amazing!

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Donna
Donna

San Jose, CA



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Hi, I am Donna from San Jose California. I enjoy reading and writing. If you do stop by and take the time to read some of my poems/Stories, please leave a review or comment. I would appreciate it, a.. more..

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