I Don't Care!

I Don't Care!

A Poem by Donna

Why do you pretend to be someone
you're not?
Could it be this is what you were taught?
Why don't you just be who you are?
That will get you far.
You don't have to be a big star,
or drive an expensive car.
I like you just the way you are.

With me, you get what you see,
that's the way it's supposed to be.
I live in reality!

I don't care if you like me or not,
that is how I was taught.

© 2018 Donna


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I like this and many people tend to do this and many have not so good agendas behind it as well. Me I can only wake up and go to bed the same no pretending here again thanks for sharing. Keep writing fellow poet

Posted 6 Years Ago


Some people try to escape reality trying to be someone else... but I agree being yourself is the best thing you can be... Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Is there any other way........ I enjoyed these words which just had to be said......... Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Thank you Neville!
Neville

6 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely... go well Donna.....
I really enjoyed this it's a good message.
The only critique I'd say is remember it's 'you're not' rather than 'your not'


Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for pointing that out. I do have a problem with that. I appreciate it.
After reading through a couple of times, I started thinking about the song 'Don't Go Changing' by Billy Joel! If we accept a person for who they are; why do they insist on trying to change? I can relate to this poetic piece - nice write my friend ... :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

That is funny! After you said you started thing of Billy Joel's Don't go changing. I read it again. .. read more

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Donna
Donna

San Jose, CA



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Hi, I am Donna from San Jose California. I enjoy reading and writing. If you do stop by and take the time to read some of my poems/Stories, please leave a review or comment. I would appreciate it, a.. more..

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