Take Some Time

Take Some Time

A Poem by Donna

It's nice to take some time
to look at this beautiful world

The clouds are so fluffy
They remind me of a bunny

The birds singing in the trees
with a nice cool breeze

Children are playing
and laughing at the park
They wish it would never get dark

I see people sitting on the grass
watching the couples pass

A beautiful orange butterfly
flies by
flying up towards the sky

The flowers smell so nice
I had to smell them twice

It's nice to take some time
to look at this beautiful world.

© 2018 Donna


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I wish everyone could/would take the time to smell the roses and invigorate themselves with nature's sweet balm. There's beauty everywhere on earth, and doubly so in your fantastic state.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Everybody is in such a hurry, they are missing out. Its to bad. Thanks for the nice review!
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Les
In the UK, we are just starting to emerge into Spring after a winter that had a real sting in the tail. This poem chimes with the sense of renewal we all get at this time of year as people slowly emerge from their winter stupor and, as you say, look again at this beautiful world. Thank you for adding to all the positivity with this lovely poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

I just love the spring. Our winters are nothing compared to yours. We don't have snow where I live. .. read more
very inspiring and uplifting just like taking time off and really smell the roses.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
sette

6 Years Ago

you are very much welcome
Yes as I am getting older, I step back and slow my life down and look at the beautiful masterpiece that God has displayed with nature. The beauty that is all around is so amazing, but when I share it with the one person I love it is so much more incredible.. Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Donna

6 Years Ago

Yes your right, but we have to know that being alone is ok. Of course it is better to share with som.. read more

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Added on March 23, 2018
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Donna
Donna

San Jose, CA



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Hi, I am Donna from San Jose California. I enjoy reading and writing. If you do stop by and take the time to read some of my poems/Stories, please leave a review or comment. I would appreciate it, a.. more..

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