To the one I hate,

I have never in my life
hated anyone
I may dislike someone,
but never hate.

Then you came along
Oh boy, was I wrong
I hate you, yes its true
I hate you!

I wish nothing but bad for you
Your a terrible person
with no feelings

I haven't seen you
in 28 years
All I can say is, "Cheers.
I hope I go another 28 years

I don't know how you sleep at night
I bet its a fight

I can tell
that your going to hell.

Reviews

[Les]

Whoa, so much anger there and very different to some of your other writing (it's good to be versatile.) I only hope that this wasn't based on a real-life experience.

[Donna]

Hi Les, it is a bit different from my other writing. It was based on real-life experience. It helps me so much to get it out in writing. Thank you for the review.

[Les]

We have a saying in the UK (maybe you have it too.) It goes along the lines of ...... "what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger." I hope you came through stronger for the experience, even if it was painful at the time.

[Donna]

Yes, we do have the same saying! I am who I am today because of my experiences in life. Thank you!

[¿]

Some people are born bitter toothed! So can't help it. But there are a lot of sweet toothed around you to share sweet stuff!

[Donna]

Your right, thank you

[Gee]

Doesn't get you anywhere, messes with you more them. An awful waste of energy

[¿]

You haven't got that heart, pity on you!

[Govind singh]

Seems to have deep grief over there...I wish I don't have to struggle with that pain anymore...best wishes:)

[Donna]

Thank you so much.

[Govind singh]

Oh srry I meant I wish u don't have to struggle with that pain anymore:).. stupid autocorrect..m srry

[Donna]

Lol, I could tell what you were saying! ☺

[Govind singh]

.....:)....

[sette]

i am really sorry for that.. at least you have poured out your anger through writing but hopefully time heal all wounds.

[Donna]

Thanks for reading and the review!

[sette]

no problem

[Ghost]

I am sorry there is so much anger in the words here... All i can say is there are people who care about you.. This was a good write to get your feelings out..

[Donna]

It does help to write it down. Thank you for those kind words.