Where in the World

I live in the United States
I think it would be so much fun
to travel to any place I want to see

There are so many places in this world
its hard to choose

Maybe I would go to Sicily
and see where my family came from
Or Australia
my favorite television show came from there
but I hear they have many snakes
England might be fun
I love the way they speak
Ireland would be nice
My favorite music group came from there
Maybe I would go to Germany
There's so much history

There are so many places to see
Oh what fun it would be.

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Thats a good thought. I have about a dozen for me!

[Donna]

Thank you Matt! ☺

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome!

[Windy Gale]

Flowed nicely. You might try using the word there less often. I enjoyed it.

[Donna]

Thank you. When I was writing I was thinking I used the word there to much. I appreciate you telling me that.

[Donna]

I changed it a bit. Could you tell me what you think now please?

[Windy Gale]

It's better for sure. I would change two things. Put an apostrophe in its (it's) on the 5th line. Secondly, I might change the line that says "my favorite music group came from there" to say instead--my favorite music group calls this home. You have already used "came from there" once, so you probably don't want to use it again.

[Donna]

Ahhh, nice! I really appreciate that.