Love is

Love is

A Poem by Donnab1116

ove,

love looks like a hall of mirrors,

love tastes like red velvet cake,

love sounds like unsteady drums,

love feels like lightning,

and smells like rain,

love moves like a child spinning in place,

love is laughing and crying but NEVER running away

© 2012 Donnab1116


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Gosh, love is all that stuff? I never knew. So, love is like a hall of mirrors reflecting your own image back at you a thousand times all the while you have this taste of red velvet cake in your mouth while drums pound in your head, and lightning bolts are shooting off all around you. And if that's not enough, you're dizzy from spinning around like a child, so dizzy that all you can do is laugh and cry simultaneously. Of course you can't run away...you're too dizzy from spinning.
Nope, I think I missed that part of love.
I'm only messing with you. I'm jealous I can't write something expressive like this in the way you wrote it.
Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Donnab1116
Donnab1116

sierra vista, AZ



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I love to write and draw, i want to be a psychologist. I love to swim and try new experiences. you could say I'm fearless but it wouldn't be true. I like to jump off cliffs (into water) and i like to .. more..

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