Gone  ღKKDღ

Gone ღKKDღ

A Poem by Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost


Gone

 
Would you notice that I'm gone
Would you even care
Would it make a difference
if I were not there

Do you ever wonder how I am
and if I'm doing ok
Would it leave an empty place
if I were gone today.

Do I ever cross your heart
on bended knee at night
Is there ever a memory
that you cling to very tight

So much I don't understand
and am so afraid to ask
My memory so fails me
as to my horrid task

Would there ever be a day
my presence you would want
Oh how these questions linger
upon my heart they tease and taunt

To my pain you have no notion
which is my debt to pay
But I paid severely once
when I allowed my heart it's say

On bended knee I ask
God's forgiveness of me
Yours I will never have
that I painfully see.

But if tomorrow came
with a bright and sunny dawn
Would you even notice
if from your life I was gone

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Original by
Donna DeLong Matthews
May 2010
© 2010 (All rights reserved)

Tammy Cochran
Gone




© 2010 Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost


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This is heartbreaking for me to read my dear friend because I know when you write you speak your heart always. I can tell you very truthfully that if there were no you, there would be myself and my family grieving your loss. All the questions you have asked here, we would be replying yes to. Yes we would hold to memories, yes we would miss the person that is you. You have touched the heart of many and you are not told often enough just how much you mean to hearts around you. Mine especially. Beautiful my friend. Love, Lesa and family

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Oh yes...I would notice...This IS beautiful!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I would sure miss you
Love Buzz

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Certainly tough questions we can't help but ask after a break up... are we still remembered... it can really be a bit of a comfort to know we are. Another really powerful piece of poetry.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would certainly miss you, though we have only met on the pages of the Internet. This is a beautiful and yes, heartbreaking creation...but know this: there are so many who love you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is heartbreaking for me to read my dear friend because I know when you write you speak your heart always. I can tell you very truthfully that if there were no you, there would be myself and my family grieving your loss. All the questions you have asked here, we would be replying yes to. Yes we would hold to memories, yes we would miss the person that is you. You have touched the heart of many and you are not told often enough just how much you mean to hearts around you. Mine especially. Beautiful my friend. Love, Lesa and family

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost
Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost

Port Orange, FL



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