Just Ask Me ღ KKD ღ

Just Ask Me ღ KKD ღ

A Poem by Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost




Just Ask Me



Oh my walls are high
obscuring loves light
but each time let down
I stand alone in the night

Many times I hold back
afraid to be free
but when a door is opened
there is nothing there to see

An empty promise of love
is too often spoken
Would it be so hard to return
what is freely given

Oh I know I'm not much
but what I give equals more
It seems love is always
just another locked door

I trust in my Savior
He sends what I need
Are my wants merely
just an unplanted seed?

Perhaps it's self fault
of what I'm blind to see
But all one has to do
is simply Just Ask Me....

ღ KKD ღ  



Original by
Donna DeLong Matthews
May 2010
© 2010 (All rights reserved)

Celine Dion
If You Asked Me





© 2010 Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost


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This is beautiful my sweet friend, and as Jim I would love to wave a magic wand and your perfect love would walk into your life, grab your heart and never let it go. Hppily-Ever-After is not impossible. Leaving saying a prayer and wishing on the first star I see tonight to bring it to pass. Hugs and love, KKL

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So sad...and yet I do detect a little bit of hope...Beautifully penned, as always.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was just wonderful. I really enjoyed the read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful my sweet friend, and as Jim I would love to wave a magic wand and your perfect love would walk into your life, grab your heart and never let it go. Hppily-Ever-After is not impossible. Leaving saying a prayer and wishing on the first star I see tonight to bring it to pass. Hugs and love, KKL

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many ways I would love to fix this Donna, really....:(( Anyone that knows your amazing heart would do the same. Almost ready to send you another write. Wishing you a very Happy Mothers Day.......LYB....:")))

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost
Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost

Port Orange, FL



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