I am so glad that you brought this requested write here to Writer's.
Your words ring so true, and reminds me of the two times we had to say goodbye at the airport. See ya later much easier to say and hear than Goodbye. That word will never be ours.
I have heard you speak often of Jenny and what a joy she is to your heart. I know it was so hard to see her leave and see ya later were also your only words to her.
i love your presentation, its stunning, and reflective of the poet's talent behind the word, referring to your creativeness. this brings a relative sigh to the lips and a memory to the heart, your words cause the reader to think about those people we miss in our own lives and how memories hold them dear, to be thought of when a smile is needed, such a beautiful poem i loved it!
You are certainly correct, good bye is such a permanent word and even when someone dear to you leaves spiritually or literally they will always be in your heart... such heartfelt and profound words. Your work is always full of wisdom and emotion.
Oh I am so here with you on this one.. I have always dreaded using the words goodbye.. though I have it just sounds so final. See you soon or later sounds much better to me. If you break the words apart GOOD and BYE.. sounds like you are more than happy that someone is leaving.. now there can be times where this could be felt.. lol .. amazing job you did putting this together.. beautiful work!
I am so glad that you brought this requested write here to Writer's.
Your words ring so true, and reminds me of the two times we had to say goodbye at the airport. See ya later much easier to say and hear than Goodbye. That word will never be ours.
I have heard you speak often of Jenny and what a joy she is to your heart. I know it was so hard to see her leave and see ya later were also your only words to her.
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Reflections Of My Heart
All the poems on my site
have come straight from the heart,
my heart.
Some are true life experiences,
some are fears, and some are
dreams for the future.. more..