That Aint No Way  ღ  KKD  ღ

That Aint No Way ღ KKD ღ

A Poem by Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost

 

 

 

 





That Aint No Way


So much I dont understand
So many Why's
but to question
who am I.



Am I who I think I am
or just the fool you took me for
Just so you know
Your not worth the even score



You so strongly
professed your love
said it was kissed by angels
and sent from above



So many lies
so much deception
How could you betray
from this love's very conception



So many lies
so much deception
How could I have been so foolish
from this love's very conception



So as you can see
part of the blame I shared
but I really did believe
that you honestly cared



I thought I was
your love ... your baby
Dont you know that aint no way
to treat a lady

ღ  KKD  ღ



Original By
Donna DeLong Matthews
April 2006

Audio
Helen Reddy
Aint No Way To Treat A Lady



 


© 2009 Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost


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Donna, you have an intently graceful, beauitful, elegant and flowing form and feature that captivates
the reader with visual appeal and splendor, so sweetly soft and tranquil and set adrift, lovely,
and sentimentally capturing, truth and joy, life, love and longing, the reader is taken to another
place and time, spiritual and soulfully touching, the poetess surrendering brilliance,
you put your heart into each and every word, this is intently wonderful as only you can :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Am I who I think I am
or just the fool you took me for
Just so you know
Your not worth the even score

When someone plays with our heart we tend to questions ourselves and how we fall for it an begin to think it is our fault but having a heart is a wonderful thing and the fact you decide to let it go is great maturity for karma will take care of them. Anyone who treats a woman that way is a fool... A wonderfully emotional write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donna, you have an intently graceful, beauitful, elegant and flowing form and feature that captivates
the reader with visual appeal and splendor, so sweetly soft and tranquil and set adrift, lovely,
and sentimentally capturing, truth and joy, life, love and longing, the reader is taken to another
place and time, spiritual and soulfully touching, the poetess surrendering brilliance,
you put your heart into each and every word, this is intently wonderful as only you can :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lesson to be learned. Love is many things, but it shouldn't be pain. This was a wonderful write. Phantom..........

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost
Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost

Port Orange, FL



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