Serpent's Lair ღ KKD ღ

 

 

Serpent's Lair  ღ KKD ღ Serpent's Lair My name they try so hard to tarnish Its me they try so hard to banish The promises they made have so easily broken they easily lie with words they have spoken It was way back when I knew with the Devil a deal was made My end I held Their tongue's equal that of a spade Pointed and black sharp as honed steel People be ware the Devil has the wheel If you dare to do battle with this serpent of evil you will sadly find it will be your upheaval You will be cast aside and lies will be told This serpent knows nothing of the rules of gold. So take heed my friends and trod gently upon this ground it is not the same as most have sadly found This Hollow's Eve fast approaches But fear I have none This Serpent will stay at home to speak for him he sends a drone Happy Halloween ღ KKD ღ Original By Donna DeLong Matthews October 2008 Serpent Lair Artist Scott Jardim

 

 

Reviews

[robert]

The serpent and the lair......Hmmmm. Reminds me of another place and another person!!
Anyway Donna, the writing is well composed and presented as usual.

[Lady Diana]

anouther good one what did i expect the snake gives me the chills but you my friend can write very well i always enjoy everything you write love and hugs KKD

[Aspiring Angel]

Very different from you my friend but I know where this write stems from and it is very fitting. As always presentation is outstanding.
Hugs,
Me

[beancountersar]

Interesting and unique work. I like the analogy between Satan and the Serpent. The song and the other effects really add to your poem. Perfect for Halloween!

Good show!