You Will Forever Haunt Me ღ KKD ღ

You Will Forever Haunt Me   Like thunder in the dead night it rumbles deep within for now its only about Me and my surviving My love I gave You cast aside You try so hard to strip my pride You treat me as though I'm nothing at all This decision you made will not be my fall. The measure of a man is his dealings with life You choose to hide causing others such strife The cowards way I never would have thought The pain you cast out upon others you have brought My love embers for the old you will forever burn But my soul for you not to torture for this I do yearn. The road back to goodness should you ever choose to trod will be rocky and rough and in the hands of God. You took what was beautiful and so meant to be but chose to turn it ugly casting such pain onto me Your head should hang with shame your heart to feel my pain My life you so torture Tell me what is your gain The man I loved so dearly was he but a betrayed dream? Did he never exist just part of your ugly twisted scheme? What is your point What is your twisted goal To take what was openly given and kill my loving soul. If to take me to my knees was what this is all about Then Glorious Victory is what you should shout Upon this pool reflecting I leave these purple flowers In rememberance of you and a love that once was ours You leave me alone no reasoning I can see to deal with what you leave behind and you will forever haunt me ღ KKD ღ Original by Donna DeLong Matthews August 2007 Evanescence My Immortal View All My Poems

Reviews

[Aspiring Angel]

"Your head should hang with shame
your heart to feel my pain "

My Dearest of Dearest Friend,

I lived this sad story with you and the lines above is so very true. I have told you a million times that
This sad ending is his loss but he has beaten you down so and hurt you so deeply that you may
never in you heart of hearts believe me. It is like stepping back into time as I go through what I know
is so painful for you to repost to Writer's Cafe, but as we always say, our writing is our therapy.

This brought me to tears. How oh how could he have stepped away from a love that was so true?
I guess neither of us will ever understand.

My sweet friend, we are back where we belong. Within a poets hall expressing our hearts.
Welcome back my dear friend Donna. Frank is a true fool!!

My Love,
Lesa
KKL

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is such a melancholic tale but presented so well and is such a familar occurence. You have very well captured the essence of a being that throws the feelings o another aside - one whom he had claimed to love. Well done. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha

[MagicHearted Knight]

The imagery you convey within your piece takes hold of the reader and leads them with you on a journey of self awareness. This is very heart felt and cathartic. Your emotion is so very evident throughout the piece. I love the flow it takes.