Try'n To Love You ღ KKD ღ

Try'n To Love You This time of uncertainty Not knowing where I'm headed When you now my whole world is falling apart as dreaded My love I give to you freely and completely At once was returned ever so sweetly With our togetherness Oh how my heart flies But when apart I'm left alone to cry What you set in the beginning Is so different from now With out a rhyme or reason I'm to understand somehow I don't understand the changes that have come about Is it love lost or just normal doubt You are my world You are my love I wont easily give up on what was sent from above The easiest and hardest thing I've ever tried to do... wanting ... needing ... pleasing and just Try'n to Love you D KKD Original by Donna DeLong M June 2007 Trying to love you Artist: Thrisia Yearwood View All My Poems © 2008 Donna DeLong Matthews (All rights reserved) ღ KKD ღ

Reviews

[J.Black]

Oh Donna,
I can relate to this poem, considering I'm still a teenager
caught up in all that crazy relationship drama.
This poem moved me, and touched me.
I like your style of writing, for it's unique and you express your emotions
straight forward, rather then hiding them.
Well done, and I shall be reading more from you!

Cheers,
Jessica.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Donna you have some inspiring work. I feel like I am inside a play on broadway with your work. I am so in love with the presentation of your words. They are living breathing letters. This piece reminded on a lost love I went through. It spark various forms of poetry out of me. In some things in life we all share the same experiences. You reminded us of this in a very beautiful way. C-Ya soon.

[Ray Hamilton]

True Love is a two way street
When one has True Love and the other has doubt
Or the ability to deceive
It never works and the hurt begins
Unfortunately I know this hurt
It's sad when you give your heart to someone
Who lies about why they are with you
But life goes on somehow
Nicely written poem
Ray