On The Outside ღ KKD ღ

 

 

 

 

On The Outside Looking In Oh the cutting words that ripped thru my heart from one who was different at our very start The ocean of tears I have alone wept The oh so many nights never slept The troubles to my self kept The silence I had to accept The giving without receipt. With our beginning not to repeat The you I so dearly love ... Where is it that you did go You leave my heart in shreds weeping as a delicate willow You took all I have I gave all there was Yet you shelf me like a useless vause I'm but a puppet dangling by a thin thread with a heart that is now all but dead I'm expected to catch the occasional crumbs of love My emotions are caged like a lonely white dove My wings you wish to bind and be kept at my side My hurt feelings lay silent that I am forced to hide The stresses of life we all must cope Drawing loved ones near gives strength and hope The door that was slammed separating you within While I'm left on the outside just looking in ღ KKD ღ Original by Donna DeLong Matthews July 2007 View All My Poems © 2008 Donna DeLong Matthews (All rights reserved) Trisha Yearwood Try'n to Love You

Reviews

[Deborah Shepard]

sad very hurtful, wounderfully writtenFantasy Comments & Graphics

[Gandré]

I am reading this, and liked several lines, beautiful was this "You took all I have / I gave all there was " --for it says so much, amazing. And this "I'm expected to catch
the occasional crumbs of love " -----this is also such a successful way to express the deep sadness, how one is fed by the minimum of feeling what was left .... So difficult write sad poetry, you did it well. Thank you. Gandr�

[Ray Hamilton]

A very sad write, no one can hurt you like the one you love
I could never understand fighting and slamming of doors in a relationship
If two people really love each other, what is there to fight about
Some try to change you, but they fell in love with you the way you were
Could never figure that one out either
Well they say live and learn
Although I don't seem to be getting any wiser LOL
Nicely written Ray { Not a Poet }