Try'n To Love You

Try'n To Love You

A Poem by Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost


Try'n To Love You

This time of uncertainty
Not knowing where I'm headed
When you now my whole world
is falling apart as dreaded

My love I give to you
freely and completely
At once was returned
ever so sweetly

With our togetherness
Oh how my heart flies
But when apart
I'm left alone to cry

What you set in the beginning
Is so different from now
With out a rhyme or reason
I'm to understand somehow

I don't understand the changes
that have come about
Is it love lost
or just normal doubt

You are my world
You are my love
I wont easily give up
on what was sent from above

The easiest and hardest thing
I've ever tried to do...
wanting ... needing ... pleasing
and just Try'n to Love you


D

KKD
Original by
Donna DeLong M
June 2007

Trying to love you
Artist: Thrisia Yearwood


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I think this one reached me as no other. I feel like you just wrote what I am feeling. It is almost hard to read and the music by T. Yearwood, I hadn't heard before (though I do listen to her) it tells it all. Totally agree with the "cowboy" he put it better than I could. vulnerability and compassion, unconditional love and keeping the faith... I live this today......

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is such a passionate expression of unconditional love... keeping the faith when love slips away knowing it belongs with you... I love the vulnerability and compassion of this poem... Beautiful work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotional and beuatiful write, very well expressed and written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost
Donna DeLong Matthews aka Gold Pen Ghost

Port Orange, FL



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