While my beliefs are different than yours, I can see you are a gentle soul.
The tender emotions expressed in your poem are it's greatest assets.
Combing through the poem a few more times will yield some benefits.
I suspect this will barely be a burden since the message of the poem is so
dear to your heart.
The kindest of wishes,
Rick
Posted 16 Years Ago
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While my beliefs are different than yours, I can see you are a gentle soul.
The tender emotions expressed in your poem are it's greatest assets.
Combing through the poem a few more times will yield some benefits.
I suspect this will barely be a burden since the message of the poem is so
dear to your heart.
The message is sound and I understand your love for Him. Now, let loose of your inhibitions and rage for all to hear (read) what it is really like. Do not let this moment become "mediocre". Let it shine as a beacon for those that are lost in that darkness and need its direction to live again. Do not rein in that passion, but let It reign instead.
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