It's My Pity Party ღ KKD ღ

It's My Pity Party ღ  Sing Along ღ You are welcome to come on in just know that while you are here It's a celebration of tears and all our fears Its My Pity Party I'll Cry if I want to Cry if I want to Cry if I want to You would cry to If you walked in my shoes Please get your tissues at the door and know that I throw the best This is a party that has been put to the test Its My Pity Party I'll Cry if I want to Cry if I want to Cry if I want to You would cry to If you walked in my shoes It is said that a real good cry is cleansing to the soul so please come right in if that's your only goal Its My Pity Party I'll Cry if I want to Cry if I want to Cry if I want to You would cry to If you walked in my shoes Its My Pity Party I'll Cry if I want to Cry if I want to Cry if I want to You would cry to If you walked in my shoes   ღ KKD ღ LMAO   Original by Donna DeLong Matthews April 2004 View All My Poems

Reviews

[Ray Hamilton]

Life for sure, has its ups and downs
We try to go through life, without a frown

We hope for happiness, on this earth of ours
For sure, it is within our earthly powers

Putting this verse here, I hope is not a sin
Don't forget in the poem, you did invite us in

Time to time I'm down here too, I have found
But life has a way, of turning our lives around

Life itself, can sometimes get you down
There's Gods nature to see, down here on this ground

I enjoyed your party, very much this day
For it gave me time and a place to play

So pick yourself up, off this cold damp ground
For you are worth one of lives, turn rounds

Nice Party
Thanks Your friend Ray
{Well I Did Tell Everyone, I Wasn't A Poet }

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

I've always found a good cry refreshing to my spirit so, yes, I'll be attending that party of yours when it fits what's going on in my life. I enjoyed your new lyrics to an old favorite song! Sharon

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Fun piece - crying definitely cleanses the soul. Thanks to Fran for sending this.
Light,
Siddartha

[Phil Sanders]

Very nicely written .. I presume that you like Neil Sedaka too?

[TL Boehm]

nicely done! thank you to Fran for sending this my way.

[Bear]

I'm so tired I have no strength for tears just now.... what a fun poem song to read while having the tune play out in my head! Lots of fun!! I am incredibly sleep
deprived just now for sure really.

Thanks for sharing this fine song... fun!!
Have a good day!!
Sallie Bear

[Fran Marie]

Tossed into darkness I sit alone
Thoughts dip into deep despair
when light fades dim,the rain falls again
Melancholy~ the name of my tears

Wavering flames from one low candle
throws dark shadows on bare walls
the rain falls again,when light fades dim
and darkest of ghostly nights befalls

Whistl'ing winds escort each drop of rain
and my soul sinks steeper still
when light fades dim, the rain falls again
drowing hopes, and my spirit's goodwill


Great Party THanks for the invite~PoPoPitifuLME~lol~Fran Marie