A very wonderful tribute to God, friends and family
It seems most of man kind is never satisfied, the more they have the more they want
I wish people could just see the bigger picture, and enjoy life and all it has to offer
If you have your health, family, food on the table, a loving partner and a roof over your head, you have it all
I enjoyed this write
Thanks your friend Ray
I like the personal aspect of the poem. You used inverted structure repeatedly throughout the poem, which takes away from the reading a little, but still very good.
Only problem - it is impossible to read with singing in the background.
A very wonderful tribute to God, friends and family
It seems most of man kind is never satisfied, the more they have the more they want
I wish people could just see the bigger picture, and enjoy life and all it has to offer
If you have your health, family, food on the table, a loving partner and a roof over your head, you have it all
I enjoyed this write
Thanks your friend Ray
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