The Halloween Express of 2007

The Halloween Express of 2007  Climb aboard Please dont distress Together we will ride The halloween express The gates ahead we will journey beyond our trip will not end until the break of dawn This trip only happens in the month of october and I promise you Moments to Remember With bats and black cats Ghosts and ghouls to journey on most would call us fools the moon hangs low peeking from behind the clouds With old hags lurking dressed in rags and shrouds Their feet planted firm refusing to give us way Will we survive and see the light of day The witches brew bubbles in their cauldron offering us cocktails of bright red crimson The night has a chill that goes to the bone Oh no dont go and leave me alone The ghouls and goblins lurk in the dark suddenly the light dawns Oh my!!! its an amusement park ღ KKD ღ Original by Donna DeLong Matthews October 2007 Written for the Moments to Remember Halloween challenge required words Moments to Remember ~ Ghosts ~ Bats ~ 2007 ~ Feet ~ Moon ~ Cocktails ~ Cauldron ~ Cats ~ Hags View All My Poems       © 2008 Donna DeLong Matthews (All rights reserved)       Audio Moon Bath

Reviews

[Legion]

Well done. Glad you placed.

[Windy]

I was almost afraid to read this one as I dont' really care for the "scary" types of writing. I am very glad I did read on however! This is a truely remarkable write. I love the rhyme and flow, even the font it perfect. What can I say but, well done, well done. OH, Congratulations on the contest. Smiles ;)