A Man In The Breeze

A Man In The Breeze

A Poem by Donna Lorenz
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A carefree man indeed!

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A MAN IN THE BREEZE

 

There is a man

Who I do know.

He seems to come,

Then he goes.

 

He might stay,

Maybe just a while

For staying put

Is not his style.

 

He loves this day.

He loves the breeze,

And there he’ll play

As long as pleased.

 

Enjoy him now,

Accept him then.

Greet him when he

Comes back again.

 

He is only high

On life, you see,

Just words and dreams

As he feels they should be.

 

When he is running free

The breeze is fine.

You might catch him

At almost any time!

 

A man in the breeze!

 

DL

© 2011 Donna Lorenz


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A man in the breeze - I'm sure of it...

He might stay,
Maybe just a while
For staying put
Is not his style.

Its his style - I'm sure of it. Listen to your heart, he whispers a seas breeze of a melody, one that's trying to capture your hearts song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice!!! I enjoyed it

Posted 13 Years Ago


...Really enjoyed this, it made me think. This is quite lovely really.


Posted 13 Years Ago


pretty good coming from a lady in Pumpkin Patch opps sorry i mean Pumpkin Center don't want get those people in the Patch mad good write he must be a lil rascal that man in the breeze

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Arthur. Your take on him is very interesting and certainly worth the watching..... Donna

Posted 13 Years Ago


A man in the breeze - I'm sure of it...

He might stay,
Maybe just a while
For staying put
Is not his style.

Its his style - I'm sure of it. Listen to your heart, he whispers a seas breeze of a melody, one that's trying to capture your hearts song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Donna Lorenz
Donna Lorenz

Pumpkin Center, CA



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I have been in CA here for years and do love it. I also have been in much of the United States and surrounding countries and to Europe twice. I Enjoy learning about people and love to travel. Poetr.. more..

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