La Diosa

La Diosa

A Poem by Sean Allen
"

I don't know any Spanish, but a beautiful spirit needs no words.

"

Miro a una diosa,

como ella entra a la sala.

Nuestra reunión de los ojos.

 

Hablamos con nuestros sentidos,
asi como amantes a veces.

Ella dice no una palabra.

© 2010 Sean Allen


Author's Note

Sean Allen
I hope that I have not destroyed the beautiful Spanish language with this poem.

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Amazingly beautiful and I know such little Spanish, what I do understand demands to know more...and now time to translate...

"Miro as a goddess
as she enters the room.
Our eyes meet.

We talk to our senses,
as well as lovers sometimes.
She says not a word."

...wow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Gracias Senor for this Spanish poem. She may not have uttered "una palabra" but the poem had an engaging theme enough to hold the interest of the reader and captivate his curiosity. Muy bien!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sean Allen

12 Years Ago

Thanks Cynthia, I was just playing with Google Translate here, I don't know any Spanish.
cynthiabuhainbaello

12 Years Ago

Me too :-)
Amazingly beautiful and I know such little Spanish, what I do understand demands to know more...and now time to translate...

"Miro as a goddess
as she enters the room.
Our eyes meet.

We talk to our senses,
as well as lovers sometimes.
She says not a word."

...wow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mira: Eso es una buen ejemplo.
Ella.... es su alma. Los palabritos no tiener gravidad sin espiritu.
See, my Castillano is as bad as your spanish!
Awesome Poem, Author.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh no... this is an awesome poetry.. La Diosa sin palabras.. awwwwww

bellisimo... fabuloso.. gorgeous.. awwwwwwwwwwwww!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sean Allen
Sean Allen

West Haven, CT



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