A Warning...

Holding A Grudge...

Ok so there was this guy

he was really shy

used to touch my hand

whenever he walked by

 

He was always discreet

made my heart miss a beat

and had the power to

make my face generate heat

 

There was that one time

we were surrounded with grime

because we were in the school gym

his body entagled in mine 

 

Deciding which lessons to miss 

we shared our first kiss

and rolled beneath the bleachers

giggling in bliss

 

He jumped up in a flash

red like a rash

i reached for his arm but

in my hand he threw cash

 

he was a b*****d, scummy

i stood there like a mummy

the condom still sat in my bag

weird feeling in my tummy 

 

i hoped the lord will save me

prayed that he forgave me

but as predictable as it was

9months later i had a baby 

 

Right now you should be eight

with another family, a better fate

i just really wanted you to know

that you were a mistake 

 

because you ruined it for me

i had to say goodbye to friends, my society 

that is why i took the pillow and tried 

to smother you when you were 3 

 

However things have changed since then

they say I'm on the mend

i will be out in a couple of weeks

to get my final revenge...

Reviews

[robin]

That's some scary sh**. I love how you lulled me into that high school innocence turned tragedy turned psyco killer, or perhaps returned in the seven sins style for future generations. Simple rhyme structure works well for this trickery. Well done, I fell for it and enjoyed the fall. Creepy.

[SM Davis]

WHOA!!!!! Very well written. It is the writer's goal to invoke an emotional reaction from the reader and you have done so. Not sure who the character is wishing to get revenge on...the father or the baby....