Interesting sensual and to the point piece. It speaks as someone who feels some little guilt about the relationship but is caught up in the heady moment and simply cannot resist. An understandable place to be, and there are worse places!
Amazing use of words and thoughts. When sin is alive and well. Two seeking the utopia of kiss and touch. Maybe not sin? I liked this poem dear Donicca. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
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Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your review I am really glad you liked it :)
Hello my name is Donika Lulgjuraj. I am from Montengro, Podgorica. I am an albanian writer. I published my first poem book in 2008 in albanian called ''Rruga e jetes'' translated '' the way of life'' .. more..