In love with Tolstoy

In love with Tolstoy

A Story by Donicca Dona L
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it will book actually just a chapter but I will edit later.

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Anna...
What the f**k?
Giovanni is standing in front of the door. What the hell he is doing here after all this years? he choose now? You are kidding me? Somehow I hope this is just a bad dream? And that he didn't broke his promise. But no. It's not a dream he is standing in front of me.
What you want?
We need to talk.
There is nothing we should talk about anymore.
Please Anna.
He pushes me through the wall.I feel his hand holding my mine. For a second I get back to my past, to a painful past. I know I am not the same Ann anymore.  I remove his hand from mine and push him away.
What do you think you are doing?
I want you back in my life, I love you I understood that now.
Get out, I don't wanna see you. Don't you get it, that I don't want your love.
Boy you don't even  know what love is. I feel so sorry for those kind of boys who are mistaking love for a physical one. Ahh, Giovanni you didn't change at all . You have all that love already and your seeking it in a another woman. But guess what I am not the other woman!! You even turned me to one of those ''city hoes'' remember, while you talked to everyone your version of our story. But some ''hoes'' are virgins.
Please Ann I'll do anything you ask me for...
You don't know what love is, come on Giovanni who you are trying to fool?The only thing that knows love is your ego.
No it's not true. I know I can feel you feel the same way still.
I don't . I guess I never did. Like you said If I would have loved you I would have surrender myself to you, I wouldn't have care of being the other woman. I didn't allow myself to be ''yours' and I won't be it. Never.Let it just go, like I did. 
You are in love with somebody else?
Ohh I should have know that this all about if I am in love with anyone else.
Does it matter? You broke your promise. Should I remember you in what did you swear you wouldn't contact me anymore? I kept mine.
F**k what I promised. Just tell me it. I need to hear it.
He is again near me, very close I feel his hands touching my face. But the only thing I feel in this moment is ''dirty'' like I am really that hoe, he talked about.
He can't make you feel the way I did , you know that too.
I hope he won't now get out Giovanni.
I still can recognize through his face expression what he feels. He is beyond full filled with anger.
You heard the lady , she asked you to leave.
For the first time I am glad I see Alen .
See you around Ann.
he completely ignores Alen while leaving.
You okay Ann?
I am...
Who was that?
I give Alen a look I know he read my look in this moment.
No I Had the chance to slap that idiot on the face I didn't.
You would have gone to jail, for someone who is worth it of that. Promise me you won't do something stupid please.
I promise Ann.



TO BE CONTINUE.....

© 2017 Donicca Dona L


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This could certainly... turn into a great chapter... that everybody would like to read in time. I like the way how creatively you plotted the characters around. It's full of, you know, love and emotions being stirred into the castle of romantic-affair -- the affair in the name of love. To her, it was love, but to him, it was nothing more than but... an affair... just to please his body not to caring of her emotions.

A very catchy chapter it is, i must say. I'd really like to read on it more if you decide continue writing something on it.

By the way, Tolstoy's one of my fav. authors. Reading him is more like watching anew world through his words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donicca Dona L

7 Years Ago

Then we have something more in common his my favorite author as well, definitively going to write mo.. read more



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well written dialogue, nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great story interesting and specially the charachters, looking forward to read the continue part..

Posted 7 Years Ago


This could certainly... turn into a great chapter... that everybody would like to read in time. I like the way how creatively you plotted the characters around. It's full of, you know, love and emotions being stirred into the castle of romantic-affair -- the affair in the name of love. To her, it was love, but to him, it was nothing more than but... an affair... just to please his body not to caring of her emotions.

A very catchy chapter it is, i must say. I'd really like to read on it more if you decide continue writing something on it.

By the way, Tolstoy's one of my fav. authors. Reading him is more like watching anew world through his words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donicca Dona L

7 Years Ago

Then we have something more in common his my favorite author as well, definitively going to write mo.. read more

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Podgorica, Tuzi, Montenegro



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