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''Karma, you'll get what you deserve''

They said seek balance.
Light and dark
sun and moon
woman and man
love and hurt.
truth and lie.

Maybe this is my life balance
you don't and I do  .
 

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You've put man in the same category as dark, moon, hurt, and lie. This can only mean you find men to be bad and unworthy.

You don't? I do? May I assume it is love that he lacks?
Perhaps Karma is for those who do bad things. Does it apply to those who think bad things?

[Donicca Dona L]

I just noticed I putted man with dark moon hurt and lie , I do not find them unworthy,but I do find in general people bad.

I didn't wanted to show ''the man like this, I didn't wanted to show the woman as bad either , the things is I just used a contrast.
Karma in this case is used as a symbol.
Maybe it's just that I don't deserve to be loved by a human like him (and believe when I say '' he is simply amazing).

[keith]

you have an honest and raw approach that causes thought to the reader. so much more than just another poem, another offering, or a quickly gathered collection of words.
i am more than impressed by your offerings ... i am gifted understanding.