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A Poem by Donicca Dona L

Tell me babe have I already lost on you?
Cause I wasn't even fighting.




© 2017 Donicca Dona L


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Wow. So much feeling in only two lines is not easy to come by. But you managed it. And wonderfully so.

Posted 7 Years Ago
A sweet short message of missed opportunity or perhaps a deliberate act of abandonment! Nice write ...

Posted 7 Years Ago

"what's better than to get lost in love" you ask? ...
having than love met by that from another.

Posted 7 Years Ago
Honest and true words. Good to be lost in the emotion of love. Thank you Donicca for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donicca Dona L

7 Years Ago

what's better than to get lost in love?
Thank you for time to read my poetry .
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I agree. When love is alive. We are very happy and you are welcome Donicca.

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 Added on May 22, 2017
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Donicca Dona L
Donicca Dona L

Podgorica, Tuzi, Montenegro



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Hello my name is Donika Lulgjuraj. I am from Montengro, Podgorica. I am an albanian writer. I published my first poem book in 2008 in albanian called ''Rruga e jetes'' translated '' the way of life'' .. more..

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