A night like this

Well, Donika,

In reading every chapter till THE END, I noticed that English is not your first language; yet, there was no trouble whatsoever in understanding everything you so creatively and interestingly composed in each line, paragraph, and chapter … and, there was not a dull spot, unnecessary or unbelievable thought, feeling, or emotion expressed anywhere throughout each and every scene.
I think you are, indeed, an excellent writer, who knows how to create believable characters and place them in realistic, interesting, and enjoyable scenarios. Honestly, you actually had me stirred and stimulated very nicely a few times (you understand?).
I would go so far as to say that, "With a good editing from an English speaking editor, you will have composed a virtual masterpiece." I even think it could be made into a very interesting movie.
Naturally, I could not help wondering how much of Ann is You(?), wishing (imagining) all the time it is a story about yourself. ; )

Now, I'll find ample time to return and review each chapter for you individually, which I promise to do very soon … but I want to come back after giving it all a suitable opportunity to soak-in just right.
Thank you ever-so warmly for sharing your beautifully romantic book, Donika ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 3 Years Ago