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A Poem by Donicca Dona L

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my soul groans in silent

in the darkened room.

I close my eyes,

the cigarette touches softly my lips.

I know, somewhere beyond.

Nicotine is kissing your lips.

I stretch my hand to feel the rain

the rain that falls gently on you.

what a lonely night.

© 2014 Donicca Dona L

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SmittyJas

Very loving said you share your innermost thoughts of loving him so dearly I can see the inside of your Heart and soul so clearly Dear Sweet Girl your in love.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

hahha yeap deeply in love ....

ANTO

I personally dont like poems that have no words in the title. Okay they are enigmatic which is all good and fair but - anyway

I think you might have meant 'silence' rather than 'silent' - to describe an inward soul-destroying groan.

I like the idea of the two mimicry to gain closeness and the ultimate failure of this attempt at self-comfort ergo the line "what a lonely night'

The brevity is good. I like

Posted 9 Years Ago

A. Amos

I always enjoy details in your poetry, this one was another classic!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Donicca Dona L

Podgorica, Tuzi, Montenegro

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Hello my name is Donika Lulgjuraj. I am from Montengro, Podgorica. I am an albanian writer. I published my first poem book in 2008 in albanian called ''Rruga e jetes'' translated '' the way of life'' .. more..