For You

feelings.

For you.... 

In the streets of Metropolis, millions of people in the dry spring season. Do I feel alive?  My thoughts stuck in a single event...  Why do I feel like this? Do I wanted to feel like this? Everything it's moving except me.  I feel empty, emptiness is a feeling.
Even the smoke of the cigarette  that I breath in me does not fulfill the emptiness. I can feel your absence. I feel the pain maybe something else that I can't perceive.
The world around me lost the colors , I lost the sense of time, hunger and thirst.The Metropolitan street fulfilled  with people. anyone and everything keeps the mask with your face. My thoughts there  where they were yesterday. Anyone and everything keeps your face but nothing is replacing you. Because everything and anyone isn't you.I forgot to ask about the latest number of the identity card but even that would not help me .  The simplest word, the most romantically one, the most intimate word it doesn't give me an impression it evokes disgust when it doesn't comes from your lips. I've turned to those typical women's not that I  considered myself special or valuable. I became ignorant and selfish at the same time I hope and dream, but you freedom did not belong to me , maybe it belonged to no one. I wanted to talk but silence doesn't talk.  And I don't know why I let you go when I had you near, and when you were far I wanted you beside me.  Even that night when our lips created an eclipse, I let you go...  if for the last time.... oh God, how I want him? a wishful thinking or a wishful star? he left without turning back, without knowing that he was the most important in my life. my breath, my muse... without you  I am  a walking shadow , a walking shadow without a soul, because my soul died that night, a long time ago... without a soul, there is nothing left for me , except waiting  for my body funeral .

I love you.

Reviews

[Rassoul]

This is so good, you wrote this with a whole heart and i really liked it.

Write more stories please, Donicca!

[Donicca Dona L]

I will try to write more :) thank you for your review

[SmittyJas]

You wrote this straight from the well of your hearts soul. It will fulfill every fantasy and dream of lovely guides through lonely nights. You spilled your love emotions and deep feeling out so truly I could see your heart bleed and It truth set you free.

[A. Amos]

This was deep and gripping, funny part is I quit smoking and its more than three months now...however the way you depicted smoke...God I really wanted to have a drag.

See this is how strong your writing effect your readers!