There away....

There away....

A Poem by Donicca Dona L

There away....
There away after the star,
there away after Moon light,
there away are hidden you!
There away after the sky
there away after the sun,
there will eventually die my hope.
Where the rainbow ends,
there will stop my love for you

© 2014 Donicca Dona L


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You write of very loving things that bring a sparkle of love to my heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago
Wasnt too sure of this until the third re-read - it definitely grows on you. The repetition gives me the feeling of being in a mesmeric trance caused by unswerving love - Its good!

Posted 10 Years Ago
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short and intriguing beautiful poem...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Donicca Dona L

10 Years Ago

glad you liked it thank you.

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Donicca Dona L
Donicca Dona L

Podgorica, Tuzi, Montenegro



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Hello my name is Donika Lulgjuraj. I am from Montengro, Podgorica. I am an albanian writer. I published my first poem book in 2008 in albanian called ''Rruga e jetes'' translated '' the way of life'' .. more..

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