Something may noteworthy, Part I

Something may noteworthy, Part I

A Poem by Louis
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Forgiving sins is something hard, but what about hardworking to deserve forgiveness.

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      Turn into blaze, burn me, my sin is unforgivable.

Be chill that Pinches me, my Spirit Convulsed.
Sink that odious, afflicted soul it's inevitable.
Grasp my heart and eventually shrinked.
What I did is clearly not justifiable.
My fault is pursuing me, I just occulted.
But today proudly, I'm here exist.
There is no way to escape or travel.
A permanent Siege blocked me, its fate.
My fault, in my sanction is to yell.
And to give a cry of love indicate.
To atone for my sin, there will be libel.
For all the people in detail will be published.
I'll be a lesson for all who will think.
That love for one breath count, passed.
But it is more than A drops of water in the ocean.
It's a sensation of happiness in stomach.
More complex than brains interactions.
It's decidedly can't be described.

© 2014 Louis


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Added on January 15, 2014
Last Updated on January 15, 2014
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Louis
Louis

Amman, Amman, Jordan



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