Hoping

Some hope

To die now instead of later

To just get rid of the pain

The sorrow

 

For it don't help that we judge them

Based on how they look, dress or even who their friends are

Then we judge even when there gone

When they finally take that endless internal suffering away

 

Though we truly don't know how they've had it in life

The school life tortured

The home life twisted

The inside perspective mutilated

 

When they finally start to feel the true happiness that life can bring

We screw them over by laughing, pointing or just talking about them

So they end up keeping there plans

For they just want to leave

 

Their physically trapped by bone, muscle, and flesh

Feeling the poison of the people around them every second of the day

The emotions of pain and hostility ready to bust out

They deserved exhilaration of the release

So they end their lives now instead of later

For this answer is the only one that can suffice.

Reviews

[WoFer]

excellent, great message. I am very impressed with your work. and I dont get to say that very often

[Sarah]

What a sad poem. ;-; But it's true, people need to start being nicer, because nothing good can come from making fun of other people, or being nasty. I really loved the last stanza, especially the first line. Great job & I hope people learn from this poem. (: