Changing

Would he see me

Would he see me,if I changed my hair

Would he see me,if I changed my style

Would he see me,if I changed my friends

Would he see me,or not see me at all

 

Would he see me is not the question

Would he care is what I need to know

Would he care, if I wasn't that pretty

Would he care, if I had no friends

Would he care, for caring for me, a little or even at all

 

Or would he care, if I just gave up

Would he care, that I don't care no longer

Would he care, because it was his fault

Would he care for not caring for me, not a little, not even at all.

Reviews

[Edward Clay]

are these song lyrics? they have rhythm and the repetition could work as a song - i ended up imaging it build to a crecendo until the last couple lines, which drop and drag. perhaps its due to little sleep. perhaps im insane. regardless.