These cuts won't mend, goodbye my friend

That's not based on reality, fortunately all of my friends are safe and in perfect health :) Just got inspired (read author's note)

These cuts won't mend,

goodbye my friend,

rest in peace,

ignore my tears.

I won't forget you

or the times i told you:

"brothers are forever",

I'll see you in heaven.

We were closer than twins,

never playing in opponent teams,

my mind, you loved reading,

I got so used, i stopped speaking.

A part of me is gone

there's nothing that can be done,

a river of tears i cried for you,

i wish i had died instead of you.

Author's Note

I was reading my read requests and, i don't know even why, i read two of the titles i had (and still have) to read together (These cuts won't mend / Goodbye my friend) and i found out they actually fit very well together, they gave me a lot of ideas, so i let them inspire me and i wrote this poem, what do you think about it?

Reviews

[Gomer LePoet]

A good piece that I see is beginning to take you on a journey that lets your heart do the speaking. I would however, give some thought to what BLBrown below has offered. Flow is always important no matter what method of writing you use.
have a great day Dom. Salute' :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Wow, that last stanza really got me. A powerful, emotional write. Great job.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love how the inspiration came from two different titles giving a wonderful title in the end:) this is different but really good! Keep up the good work.






Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[kayla]

Wow. This is beautiful and highly emotional(: I'm glad that you could get this out in poetry(:

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good. This is a great, sad, deep poem. Excellent

[eglantine]

I want to know what makes the two people so close and why? I want to know why the speaker is so devestated. I do like the title tho

[Emrys Realmskip]

Wonderful!
i'm glad my poem title inspired you!! :)
Keep up the great work!

[devon]

Very sad.

It's amazing how as writers even the simplest of things can inspire us. :)

[K.]

very passionate,
I'm impressed by the feeling in your words, I can relate.
Inspiration doesn't always come from the best places, however sometimes it can turn out beautiful work.
well done.

[Krista Weiss]

I really like it :) It's like sad and stuff but I still love it :))