Taylor Swift

Guys, have you ever fell in love for a VIP? Well, I'm having such a HUGE crash for Taylor Swift i wrote her a poem, tell me what you think about it ;)

Your voice is softer than an angel's,

your beauty is envied by mermaids,

no muse can write better songs than yours,

they teach my heart to love.

When I hear your voice, I fall in love.

Your blond hair fills my dreams, 

no wonder why I smile at night.

I need you,

more than the ocean needs its waves

or the night sky, its lovely moon and

I just feel fainting knowing you'll never know me.

Even if you knew me, what would it change?

I don't deserve you 

and you can look for better than me.

If perfection should be called by another name,

I'd bet the ears that introduced you to me

and these few silly verses that come from my soul,

this name would be Taylor Swift.

Author's Note

No rhymes, for that poem i decided simply to follow my heart :)

The thing that really hurts me is that, to quote Taylor, "she don't even know me, she's never gonna love me like i want to", well ... guess that's the sad point about falling in love with VIPs xD

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I remember being in love with a singer when I was very young. He was my first "teen crush" and actually my only teen crush. While I thought he was "cute" it was deeper than that. There was something about his music that inspired me and put me on the path to writing. Over 30 years later - I am still on that path.

[Amadi Judith]

This is a deep ode. Indeed it is heartfelt. I can imagine that the writer is fascinated and delighted by taylor swift. good work.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thank you =D

[Buniheart]

AWWWWW, this is so sweet and cute!! Taylor Swift is an amazing singer and although this may sound a bit obsessed, there's no harm in writing a beautiful poem about her.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice love poem. Many people have there own celebrity or someone who they feel for like this, yours perhaps is Taylor Swift.

[Lumière Dé..]

Dude we've all been there...... maybe not with Taylor but we've been there. How many times have we facebook ranted about her? xD

[Laura Maidah]

Uh... This sounds obsessed. I am literally weeping for you. No one is perfect. Definitely not celebrity. We admire fame from afar. It's glamorous. And engineered. Taylor Swift is just as fake as eighteen year old virgins. She is manufactured for people like you. You have talent as a poet. Now put it to good use.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thank you for your review :) I'd just like to tell you I'm not so into her because she's famous, actually I think I'm one of the few people in this world that wouldn't like that much to be famous, I like her because she's beautiful and even more because of how deep she is, I can see it in her songs, I know they put a lot of make-up on her, but even not maked up I still think she's pretty (something I can't tell to most of the goddesses in my school). Don't know there, but here 18 yrs old virgins still exist :)
Thank you very much for your compliments :)

[Roe]

very nice write

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Lol. I think somebody has a crush. XD I'm not a big fan of Taylor Swift but I like this. It's really good.

[Gomer LePoet]

Dom,Dom, Dom. Your feelings are so understood. She is a looker and a fine young talent, but if I had to make a bet, I'd bet she would be the lucky one to know someone like you. Someone who is intelligent, kind and has a great heart and love for the world and everything and everyone in this world. But it is fun I'm sure to look at her picture, hear her sing and just dream.....

[Leslie Philibert]

I can understand that you like her, she´s a good looker and a good singer, nice one.