Riddle L

Riddle L

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I'm heavier than an elephant,
longer than a little palm tree,
yet i fly away free,
open wide skies i face
and my enemy Gravity i always amaze.
I mark the beginning of my passengers' vacation
taking me to escape is such a temptation,
magnificently, among clouds, i dance,
but of turning my annoying noise off there's not a chance. 
if i don't do my job well, people die,
sadly, it's a truth i can't deny,
yesterday i was in Rome, now i'm in Paris, tomorrow who knows?
a man, with his assistant, my future holds,
who am i?
Say my name or say goodbye.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Finally i've written half book =D !
Used Chaucer rhyme scheme (ABBCCDD etc ...),
so what do you think about this one?
The correct answer is ... Airplane.

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Nice riddle. I like this part:
"yesterday i was in Rome, now i'm in Paris, tomorrow who knows?
a man, with his assistant, my future holds,"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amusing and off the wall, nicely written too

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one. I could even guess the correct answer. Thank you for your entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha!!! well this was fun!! you did a great job my friend!! keep it up!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
wow, great description and perception of a flying object that is called airplane. brilliant work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha. This is cute! You have a really unique way of describing things. This is really good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny riddle...good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airplane! :D You're great at writing riddles. You do indeed have a talent.





Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Airplane :) I get so happy if i can work them out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 19, 2012
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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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