Riddle H

Riddle H

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I'm no bigger than your fist,
I fly from side to side with no direction,
my insane journey is not my intention,
they hit me, and force me, and i can't do otherwise,
every drop of sweat makes my hopes of stopping arise
but my cruel enemies won't give me up that easily,
with their scaring weapons they will hit me badly,
because of them i cry in sorrow,
they make me afraid of not coming to tomorrow,
my pain, hiding with savage roars they try,
not a single tear i see in their eye,
such an endless time i spend in that net-split field
untill the final score is revealed,
'till the next game i'm free to rest,
guess my name and pass my test !

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Hope you liked it !
Used Chaucer rhyme scheme (ABBCCDD etc ...),
The answer is ... Tennis ball.

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hahahaha..maybe I'm wrong :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A ball? :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its a fly also. At least I hope so lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Greatly written poem!with powerful lines!and i am for the answer!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel like you're referring to some kind of sport......? Hmmm challenging. I like it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe a fish?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 13, 2012
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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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