Riddle G (translation below)

Riddle G (translation below)

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
"

Opinions and answers are welcome :)

"
Figlia del mare:
un impeto d'acqua che 
bacia la sabbia.

Translation:

Daughter of the sea:
A water impetus that
kisses the sand.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Hope you like it !
The answer is ... Sea wave.

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Very short, but it sounds pretty. This was kinda obvious though not really challenging, a wave because it just grazes the sand and back out to the sea it goes, like a small kiss on the cheek. Daughter of the sea, meaning offspring, or a smaller part of, a wave originating from the sea. use logic and it is simple. Nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I'm going to go with wave :) This is actually really fun :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hmmmm..thinking........of.....the....answer.... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Daughter of the sea as in daughter of the god of the sea perhaps??? hmm. Impetus means a driving force .. could it be a wave??? I'm not sure. But its a great riddle :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i think a mermaid lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice riddle, the answer, I do not know.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A seashell?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hmm a wave?

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Added on June 13, 2012
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Tags: Haiku, Riddle, Poetry

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外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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