Riddle G (translation below)

Opinions and answers are welcome :)

Figlia del mare:

un impeto d'acqua che 

bacia la sabbia.

Translation:

Daughter of the sea:

A water impetus that

kisses the sand.

Author's Note

Hope you like it !
The answer is ... Sea wave.

Reviews

[Who Cares]

Very short, but it sounds pretty. This was kinda obvious though not really challenging, a wave because it just grazes the sand and back out to the sea it goes, like a small kiss on the cheek. Daughter of the sea, meaning offspring, or a smaller part of, a wave originating from the sea. use logic and it is simple. Nice write

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good riddle. I like seeing the poem in two languages. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Awe, so very sweet x

[Talismanic]

all the words you need hahaa give me a minute...
beautiful beautiful btw

[To be scene To be heard..]

nice riddle i would havent guessed a wave lol

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a fine poem, and proves that translation can produce lines of incredible beauty, maybe due to the direct transfer of syntax. Really good poem.

[FelicityAllona]

.w-o-w!!

[Chip]

Answer I do not know haha. But nice riddle.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is a great riddle but I don't know the answer. :) Aha.




Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[TL Boehm]

I've waited for ten reviews on my pages....well. I love the foreign language - would it be Italian? And I am thinking - surf...
Beautiful in both languages.