Riddle F

Riddle F

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I fall from the night
sky, humans watch my journey
and ask for a wish.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Hope you like it !
The answer is ... Shooting star.

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A shooting star :) This is beautiful. You're successful at great job at writing riddles I hope that you realize that.
One time me and my best friend were laying on her tramopline and we spotted atleast fifteen shooting stars. We both wished for a guy that we met to remember to text me. I don't know if it was a coincedince or the wish came true, but he ended up texting me :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this is beautifully written but why do you tell the answer right away without letting our imaginations run free. great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You made a easy one. Good for us older people. Thank you for the riddle. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Quaint and burting with imagery!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I think its a shooting star!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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a shooting star i love them there so beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Again, obvious old wives tale says if you wish upon a shooting star that wish will come true and shooting stars are only visible at night. Short and simple. Nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Dominic writes well, this is clever and witty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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nice bit of senryu. Thank you for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A shooting star!! You're really good at these.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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shooting star :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 13, 2012
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Tags: Haiku, Riddle, Poetry

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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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