No ordinary boy

This is not a poem is just the flowing of my thoughts, hope you like it

My friends have always asked me:

What's wrong with you?

I've always been strange and i don't hide it,

my friends want to be famous and popular,

i just want to be good at what i like,

they write their facebook status in italian,

i write them in english, i like it way more,

they try to write songs

i try to write poetry 

they like soccer,

i like hockey,

they want to be professional soccer players,

i want to be a neurologist or a heart surgeon,

they dream of exotic hot places,

i'd rather live in a white snow-covered land.

They ask me what's wrong with me,

i answer i'm just ... me.

Author's Note

No intent of writing a poem so you won't find rhymes nor anything like that here, just a flowing of thoughts i found cool to write down :)

Reviews

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

Awesome writing, D-man! It is very respectable that you choose to be your own person in spite of peer pressure to be something else. Your dreams and aspirations are great! My girlfriend's brother is currently stationed in the military in Italy. He posts pictures for us. Beautiful place! Keep writing, you have a LOT of talent, my man!

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is beautiful, nice flow of words(i mean thoughts)..
But it's good to be different, it means you're unique, you're not a weirdo, some people will think like that, differently.
Remember that you have to BE YOURSELF!

[MandaBear]

its very nice. i like that you know who you are and you are comfortable with that:) besides why wouldnt you want to be your self you are cool :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem, and I admire your courage to think in different ways than the others.
You write excellent English, and want to be a surgeon, so there is nothing wrong with you, but a lot right !

[devon]

Little did you know that your flow of thoughts became a lovely poem expressing who you are and how you are fine/proud of it. :)

And I was born and have been raised in Georgia for all fourteen years of my life. You are very wise to prefer the cold! The summer's here are almost unbearable. At least in the cold, you can put as many layers of clothes on as you need! When it's hot outside, you can only take so much clothes off in public before it becomes illegal!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the colder places also. I had opportunity to live in Florida and Texas. Too hot for my skin. Good to be different. I believe the more we know. The better off we will be. Good to be yourself. Too many false people in this world. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[AK]

Really nice poem! And sometimes I observe that a flow of thoughts on a person's mind sometimes forms extremely beautiful poetry. Great write!