No ordinary boy

This is not a poem is just the flowing of my thoughts, hope you like it

My friends have always asked me:

What's wrong with you?

I've always been strange and i don't hide it,

my friends want to be famous and popular,

i just want to be good at what i like,

they write their facebook status in italian,

i write them in english, i like it way more,

they try to write songs

i try to write poetry 

they like soccer,

i like hockey,

they want to be professional soccer players,

i want to be a neurologist or a heart surgeon,

they dream of exotic hot places,

i'd rather live in a white snow-covered land.

They ask me what's wrong with me,

i answer i'm just ... me.

Author's Note

No intent of writing a poem so you won't find rhymes nor anything like that here, just a flowing of thoughts i found cool to write down :)

Reviews

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

Awesome writing, D-man! It is very respectable that you choose to be your own person in spite of peer pressure to be something else. Your dreams and aspirations are great! My girlfriend's brother is currently stationed in the military in Italy. He posts pictures for us. Beautiful place! Keep writing, you have a LOT of talent, my man!

[afra]

there is nothing wrong with u ..u are different from them in a good way ...

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

This is really good. I find that I relate to it very well. It could be a poem just the way it is. It's wonderful.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, I think that's a great thing to do is be yourself. There's definitely nothing wrong with you, with trying to be who you are. :)




Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Kaya]

Even though its not a poem, its such a lovely flow of thoughts, and such (in my opinion at least) a wise message. I really enjoyed it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A great thought progression! x

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice thoughts, though this could very well be a poem just the way it is I think. Anyways, love the ending here:
"they dream of exotic hot places,
i'd rather live in a white snow-covered land.
They ask me what's wrong with me,
i answer i'm just ... me."

[Luciole]

aww this was great! i find myself thinking similar things.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great poem.
BElieve in YOUrself! :-)

[To be scene To be heard..]

Very great write to be different from your friends is what will make you stand out. p.s. it's never a bad thing to stand out.