Riddle D

Riddle D

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I am you,
at least you think it,
when you see me.

Sadness, happiness, anger you show me,
and like an expert mime, i give it
back to you.

I'm the friend, 
many people can't
leave home without greeting.

I am the maid helping
my lady daily, she can't
live without me, her friend.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Tried again my rhyme scheme ABC CBA DEF FED
The answer is ... Mirror.

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I was confused at first, up until the end of the second stanza. I'm slow!

And I totally blushed at myself, because the last two lines are very true for me. God, I am soooo vain. :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A mirror? True stuff about the lady in there :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Amazing riddle, I think it is a mirror though I'm not too sure... Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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