Riddle D

Riddle D

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I am you,
at least you think it,
when you see me.

Sadness, happiness, anger you show me,
and like an expert mime, i give it
back to you.

I'm the friend, 
many people can't
leave home without greeting.

I am the maid helping
my lady daily, she can't
live without me, her friend.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Tried again my rhyme scheme ABC CBA DEF FED
The answer is ... Mirror.

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This is a great riddle and I can definitely tell this is about a mirror :)





Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah teh mirroe indeed my love! x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice riddle for a poem, your riddles are fun and you are good at them. Nice rhyme scheme as well. Enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mirror??

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mirror!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always interesting logic in your words. I believe the answer was given. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

????? a mirror and i loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its a mirror or maybe beauty?? Idk but your riddles are awesome! as usual! great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your riddles are great! When I got to the third stanza, I thought it was a mirror....looking at the other reviews I'm going to take a shot in the dark and guess that I may be right..? haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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