Riddle B

Tried my first "haiku-riddle", tell me your opinions about it (be honest, of course !!) and write your answer in the review ;)

I fall from the sky,

humans watch my decay from

behind their windows.

Author's Note

The answer is ... Rain.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A haiku that is a riddle... awesome. I love how you did rain as "humans watch my decay" that is awesome. Very nice, love this. Your riddles are fun, and just enough clues to piece them together, and the clues you write are interesting just like "humans watch my decay" which is the part I like most in this.

[AK]

Nice haiku riddle! When I first read it, I thought about meteors falling from the sky, not rain like all the others. But haha, I don't think I'm right... Keep writing!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

It sounds like rain to me. I think you done an excellent job with description in these three lines :)
Amazing!



Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[MandaBear]

its very cool. it sounds like rain :)

[eglantine]

I like this one a lot more than Riddle C